Feedback so far from my class pals:
Briony - "Your trailer so far has a lot of potential, I like the storyline idea and am intrigued to see it finished. I think the title 'The Unnerved' is good as it suggests there could be a double meaning to the plot. I think you need to cut down your bath sequence so it leaves more to the imagination"
Colleen - "I think you have good analysis of what you're doing from different sources of media. I like the concept of your film, I think it's clever. I think you need to be better organised as you're focusing primarily on your blog and not other things"
Jemma - "Your work is really good, it is well researched and you have valuable ideas. Something that may make your work better could be for you to add more photos of your progress i.e production photos"
Babs - "I think that your excitement and passion for creating horror through your own visual eye illustrates to the audience how you capture emotion and meaning. I think you need to manage your time better though as you have been focusing too much on your blog"
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